Learn English – A comma before “using”

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I want to say: We focused on X, using Y. Is it correct to put a comma before "using"?

I don't want to write We focused on X and used Y. because I find it ambiguous: it is unclear whether Y was done to achieve X, or Y was done in addition to X.

I don't want to write We focused on X using Y. because it is then unclear whether I used Y myself, or simply that I was interested in "X using Y".

Example: We focused on patient outcome prediction, using dynamic Bayesian networks to model patients' progression throughout their stay in the ICU.

Best Answer

You got it right. The comma is not only allowed—it is effective in adding clarity, as well as accurately indicating a normal spoken pause

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