Learn English – as such, on their own, per se, by themselves

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Which phrase in bold would you suggest to use? I hope it is clear what I am trying to say, but I am not sure about the word choice. Or perhaps I should use a different construction?

Also, I hope that I use the construction "not only … but also" correctly here.

  1. We will study discrete particle systems. They are not only of great interest on their own, but also represent an important intermediate step toward analysis of continuous systems.

  2. We will study discrete particle systems. They are not only of great interest as such, but also represent an important intermediate step toward analysis of continuous systems.

  3. We will study discrete particle systems. They are not only of great interest per se, but also represent an important intermediate step toward analysis of continuous systems.

  4. We will study discrete particle systems. They are not only of great interest by themselves, but also represent an important intermediate step toward analysis of continuous systems.

Best Answer

(Native American English speaker here.)

They're all clear, they're all normal English, and it's nearly impossible to say which one is best.

These are also equally good:

They are not only of great interest for their own sake, …

They are not only of great interest for themselves, …

If you want some factors to consider in making a choice, which might also shed light on other word choices in other situations, here are some:

  1. These days, it might not be a safe bet that your audience knows what per se means. For an academic audience, though, per se is fine. Note that since per se is Latin in the middle of an English sentence, it should be italicized in writing.

  2. The meaning of “as such” is correct, but in this context it's less immediately clear than the other (all-English) versions. Other people may differ, of course. But I go through a moment wondering “as such what?

  3. An explicitly reflexive wording—“their own”, “themselves”—adds weight to the meaning you intend here, and probably makes the sentence clearer and easier to read.

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