Just a simple question about the best sentence construction to express an idea.
Is it correct to say:
- How much I enjoyed the movie is greater than how much I am disappointed by it.
I don't if there are specific rules involved but beginning a non-question sentence with "how much" sounds awkward. According to dictionaries the phrase "how much" is usually used as a question starter or an emphasis on the degree/extent of something.(You have no idea HOW MUCH the city has changed).
So is it correct to use it to suggest 'a certain/some extent' like I did above?
Or is it better to reword it into:
- The degree to which I enjoyed the movie is greater than the degree to which I am disappointed by it.
Can you suggest better ways to convey the same idea?
Many thanks
Best Answer
Both of your sentences are correct, but they're both very awkward, because they sound very formal and mathematical and precise, which does not really suit the contents of the sentence. ("Is greater than" and "the degree to which" are not common in conversation.) Here are some more natural ways to express the same idea:
The meaning also seems a bit strange — if you enjoyed the movie, then why are you disappointed by it? — but you can fix that by explaining your disappointment:
There's some truth to this, but I don't think it's a completely accurate description. How much can non-awkwardly start a non-question sentence in at least a few cases, such as:
And in cases where it is a bit awkward, I don't think that replacing it with "the degree to which" really helps.