In brief, I want to write an e-mail inquiring an agency as when will they submit the work.
This is what I have written. I am not quiet sure whether it is the proper way of writing the mail. I would appreciate if you could provide feedback as to how can I write it in correct grammar.
Dear Xyz,
Hope you had a great weekend. I wish to inquire as when will you submit the files regarding the project.
Many thanks,
Oklao Sds
Is it grammatically acceptable?
Best Answer
Its pretty close.
"Hope" by itself is a bit too informal for a business situation.
"as to" is basically the same as "regarding".
"you will" since this clause is not a question. If it were, you could use "will you".