So, I'm walking down the street with a friend, who learns that my brother-in-law is a barber, and I go there to get my hair cut. My friend says,
So, do you pay for those haircuts, or does he do it for free?
I think I understand how this works, but I want confirmation. If I describe this conversation using direct speech, I would write:
He asked me, "Do you pay for those haircuts?"
but indirectly, I would write:
She asked me if I paid for my haircuts.
(Assuming I did this correctly, I noticed two things changed: the word do changed to if, and the tense of the verb pay changed from present to past).
Here is my question: Would it be right or wrong if I tried to rewrite it something like this?
She asked me did you pay for them.
That sounds wrong to me, especially without any quotation marks, but I want to make sure I'm understanding how the English changes between direct and indirect speech, particularly when the reported speech was originally a question.
Best Answer
Well, that's a long story! The normal pattern of tense changes in reported speech is:
DIRECT SPEECH ----------------- REPORTED SPEECH
Also, there are often changes in words which refer to the people, time, or place. They are dictated more by logic than by any rules:
Example: "I'm bringing my brother here tomorrow," she said. She said that she was bringing her brother there the next day.
REPORTED QUESTIONS
"Where do you live?" she asked him. She asked him where he lived.
"Is it raining?" he asked. He asked if/whether it was raining.
"Which shirt shall I wear?" he asked his girlfriend. He asked his girlfriend which shirt to wear.
So, because the example you gave is a yes/no question, it wouldn't be grammatical to change it as: She asked me did you pay for them.
You need to use if/whether while making other changes.