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The System must be secure:

a. Data encryption.
b. User Identification using SIM number and a password.
c. User Authentication using verification code.

I think the sentence is not grammatically correct. I don't know how to connect "the system must be secure" with the listed items. I mean that the three situations a, b, and c should be grammatically connected to the main sentence.

Best Answer

Just add in regard to.

The System must be secure in regard to:

  • Data encryption
  • User identification through SIM number, and password
  • User authentication through verification code
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