Learn English – I am keen to discuss further (with you) about how I can contribute to your company

sentence-construction

I am feeling 50/50 about whether I should add 'with you' in this sentence.

  1. I am keen to discuss further with you about how I can contribute to your company.

  2. I am keen to discuss further about how I can contribute to your company.

Are they both correct? Which sentence is better? Thank you!

Best Answer

Both sentences seem to be correct. However, it depends on who you are addressing. If you are talking to one person, the first option would be the best choice. If you are talking to multiple people, or a whole company, then you should use option 2.

As a British person, I recognize that "keen" is a word mostly used in Britain. If you are talking to somebody who's not from Britain, maybe change "keen" into one of keen's synonyms.