I want to ask;
What are the first 3 question marks on your head while you enter into a store for the first time?
Is this sentence correct grammatically?
Isn't it clumsy or wordy?
Is there a better way to say it?
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I want to ask;
What are the first 3 question marks on your head while you enter into a store for the first time?
Is this sentence correct grammatically?
Isn't it clumsy or wordy?
Is there a better way to say it?
Best Answer
A Google Ngram (link) shows that "questions you (may/might) have" is more common than the idiomatic "questions on your mind" by at least an order of magnitude. And I think the former is more neutral and natural.
Below are two examples, showing how different phrasing leads to different answers. This first example uses "things you want to know" as another way to write this concept:
Now suppose you are creating a more focused (perhaps psychological) questionnaire, and you want people to provide questions that they believe might occur spontaneously upon entering a store: