Learn English – ‘it refers not to …’ vs. ‘it doesn’t refer to …’

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For me it refers not to the store and not to the one clerk you spoke to but collectively to the not-further-specified people who work there.

Is the structure of that sentence, in reference to how 'not' is used, an excellent way to circumvent the use of the modal 'do'?

I ask because, as a non-native speaker and not a linguist, I would have written the above sentence as follows:

​1. For me it doesn't refer to the store and doesn't refer to the one clerk you spoke to but collectively to the not-further-specified people who work there.

or perhaps:

​2. For me it doesn't refer to the store and to the one clerk you spoke to but collectively to the not-further-specified people who work there.

If the original version is grammatical, can I generalize that use of 'not' to other cases, for example "I'm going not to answer, but to waiting an answer"?

Best Answer

For me it refers not to the store and not to the one clerk you spoke to but collectively to the not-further-specified people who work there.

I would write it this way:

1a) For me, it refers not/neither to the store or to the one clerk you spoke to but collectively to the not-further-specified people who work there.

or

1b) For me, it doesn't refer to the store or to the one clerk you spoke to but refers/does collectively to the not-further-specified people who work there.

However, when you write the sentence following independently, it may be a little awkward. It is possible under some circumstances, though.

It refers not to the store.

Let's get back to the sentence 1a. You can rephrase it to:

For me it refers collectively to the not-further-specified people who work there, not to the store or to the one clerk you spoke to.

You use "not" to make a comparison of the phrases "to the store/the clerk" and "to the not-further-specified people". This is the reason why the sentence 1a sounds OK.

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