This is a tricky question. The native ear will immediately recognize that "had been remained" is not correct. The had should be followed by a past participle. Remained and been are both past participles; you can use one or the other, but not both.
So, either of these could be used to start the sentence:
- He had been president for 20 years...
- He had remained president for 20 years...
This issue gets tricky, however, when you switch to the passive voice. In that case, you can use he had been followed by a past participle, as in:
- He had been elected 20 years ago...
That's a valid formation, and it's listed as the past perfect passive verb form in this table1:
So, the question becomes, why can the verb elected be used in this way, but not the verb remained?
The key is that the sentence with elected is using the passive construction, but the sentence with remained has an active construction. As Dave Sperling says on his ESL website:
Because subjects of passive verbs receive the action, verbs that cannot have objects (intransitive verbs) do not have passive forms.
If you look up the words in a dictionary, you'll see that elect is transitive, and remain is intransitive, which is why had been remained sounds so awkward to the native ear, while had been elected sounds just fine – although many native speakers might have a hard time explaining why.
Now, you can explain it for them: "It's because remained is an intransitive verb, so it cannot be used in the passive voice."
The way you are using your sentences they mean the same.
However, the past perfect
had been told
usually signifies something that has happened (and completed) in the more distant past than the simple past
was told
So
Originally, I had been told the house was brown, but then I was told it is actually yellow.
means you were first told the house was brown, and then later told it was yellow.
Best Answer
I have doubts about the correctness of both the original sentences. But I would use "The money had been handed over to the driver this morning" (past perfect) to refer to something happened before something else that we are talking about, like in "They didn't give me the money because it had been given to the driver this morning". Or I would use "The money was handed over to driver this morning" (simple past) to describe something happened this morning