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I was reading an article on modifiers [citation needed], but some of the sentences confused me.

1) Slender and graceful, her eyes filling with tears,
Brenda completed her skating routine, her long hair
whipped by her speed.

What type of sentence is this? why is "slender and graceful" at the beginning of the sentence? I know this sentence is related to "absolute phrase".

2) Gray-bearded and toothless, dressed in jockey shorts
and a stash bag, he walked up and down the sidewalk,
restlessly waiting to begin.

Same type like the first one, but it's related to a participle, isn't it?

3) Frightened, confused, giggling hysterically, Lucille
collapsed into the nearest fountain.

Maybe here the writer wanted to say: Lucille was frightened, confused and was giggling hysterically, so she collapsed into the nearest fountain. If it so, my question is: Is it correct to write present and past participle in a raw?

Could somebody explain these sentences to me?

Best Answer

To answer the direct question: yes, it is correct.

The descriptions are adjective clusters and they may appear before or after the noun they modify.

The first example could have been written as so:

Brenda, slender and graceful, her eyes filling with tears, completed her skating routine, her long hair whipped by her speed.

The same sentence modeled as you suggested would read:

Brenda was slender and graceful, her eyes were filling with tears and she completed her skating routine, as her long hair was whipped by her speed.

This modification would convey the same meaning. The original is less verbose. Which you'd choose would depend on what style you were trying to convey.

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