Someone was giving something away for free and I asked the below…
Hello Kristian, may I be considered please, I can collect tonight after work
I am asking for clarification as I was told I used the word "considered" in the wrong context.
Thank you in advance.
Best Answer
I think your use of 'considered' is absolutely fine. Your sentence sounds a little formal ... even though it is a context where formality is appropriate.
The only problem I see is punctuation. Technically you have three sentences which you have joined with commas. To sound a bit more natural, and to correct the punctuation, you could say: