Is this sentence the expression "what was at the time" in the following sentence correct?
At the end o my goal was to increase my knowledge in X and what was at the time one of the most exciting fields in Y
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Is this sentence the expression "what was at the time" in the following sentence correct?
At the end o my goal was to increase my knowledge in X and what was at the time one of the most exciting fields in Y
Best Answer
The "at the time" is a red herring. "what was at the time" is not a linguistic unit. Rather, the key structure is "what was [complement of was]": "what was one of the most exciting fields".
"At the time" is just an additional modifier on "was", which must refer to some time that had been given earlier.
This is a "what was one of the most exciting fields" is a special type of clause called a wh-clause.
The canonical sentence behind the clause is "one of the most exciting fields was what". This could be used by itself as a question: "What did you say? One of the most exciting fields was what?"
But usually the wh-word (such as "what" or "who") undergoes "wh-movement", whereby it is transported to the front of the clause.
That clause is then nominalized: it serves a noun denoting whatever the wh-word refers to, and we can use it in various ways:
In such examples, we can replace the wh-clause by a noun, and still have something grammatical:
Now about the sentence:
Firstly, "knowledge in X" should probably be "knowledge of X". "knowledge in X" is not out of the question depending on what X is. For instance we can have expertise in physics, but knowledge of physics (not in). We can be knowledgeable in physics, on the other hand.
Your "at the time" phrase must refer to a time which was given earlier, otherwise it is dangling. It raises the question "at what time?" We know that the time was the same as that time when you had the goal. I.e. you had a goal to study a field in Y. At the time when you had this goal, this field in Y was one of the most exciting fields in Y. (But we do not now what time that was; it must be given in some earlier sentences.
If your intent is to say that X was one of the most exciting fields in Y, then the sentence is wrong. It should be:
Your sentence says that your goal was to increase your knowledge in X, and to increase your knowledge in some unnamed field, which was one of the exciting fields in Y. At this point, your reader or listener will expect you to reveal what field that was. A very short way to do that is to use phrase headed by the word "namely":