Learn English – When one thing happened because of another thing and so on… way to express idea concisely

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I am having 3 sentences and next comes because of the first one.

  1. Indeed, the absence of a segment causes a lack of graph edges which refer
    to that segment.
  2. The effect leads to a distorted cycle.
  3. As a result, a
    fault corner will be produced.

now, my problem is to make a one concise sentence telling all; so, here is my best try,

Indeed, the absence of a segment causes a lack of graph edges which refer
to that segment which then leads to a distorted cycle and consequently
a fault corner.

my question is, a case like above (i mean one thing happened because of another actions and so on..) what is the best way to explain. thanks.

Best Answer

I think the best way is:

Indeed, the absence of a segment causes a lack of graph edges which refer to that segment, leading to a distorted cycle which produces a fault corner.

Alternatively:

Indeed, the absence of a segment causes a lack of graph edges referring to that segment, leading to a distorted cycle that produces a fault corner.

This assumes that the prior sentences cause the "indeed" to make sense. Otherwise, remove it.

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