Learn English – Additionally … also

redundancy

[disclosure: I'm not a native speaker of English]

I work as a university professor. When writing up lecture notes as well as research papers, I have a tendency to write things like the following.

A Monte Carlo simulation shows that Factor A is a significant one. Additionally, it also shows that the outliers can be grouped together as a special case.

The question is whether the Additionally…also sequence is a stylistically acceptable one, given that both additionally and also convey additivity. I keep on using it because using just one of the two sounds weird, in a way that I really can't put my finger on (but then, this might be because I don't speak English natively).

If Additionally…also is deprecated, I would welcome suggestions of alternative ways of expressing the same meaning.

Best Answer

I agree that additionally...also appears redundant, although it can be used appropriately when you're saying, essentially, that in addition to the aforementioned, they show xyz as well. However, a single also or in addition is not strange to my native AmE ears. In most cases, therefore, I would avoid that construction.

This Ngram shows how much more frequent In addition is than Additionally to start a sentence.

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So, you can write

The simulation also shows that the outliers can be grouped together as a special case. or In addition, it shows..."