Is the use of the colon correct in this sentence?
She pushed the thought aside because she didn't want to ask herself
questions like: Where did he go? Was he even real? Was she going crazy? She just wanted to pretend like it had never happened.
This is in a work of fiction. I know a colon should come after an independent clause, but are there exceptions to this rule, especially in fiction? This seems like the simplest way to structure the sentence, and I like the placement of the punctuation because it clearly sets off the list of questions, but I also want to make sure this is correct, or at least passable in fiction.
I have both the Chicago Manual of Style and MLA as references, but neither suggests this structure is explicitly incorrect.
Thank you for your thoughts!
Best Answer
First off, I am aware of this question being asked quite a while ago, but recently I had to face a similar dilemma. And here is what I found out.
According to The Chicago Manual of Style, direct unquoted questions may be introduced using colons as long as the introduction constitutes a complete sentence: a grammatically complete sentence. (The Chicago Manual of Style, 17th Edition. Part II, Chapter 6, Rule 6.65, University of Chicago Press, 2017.)
So what if you wrote your sentence this way:
Indeed, it would look really neat.
Cheers!