Learn English – Deleting a word from the start of a quotation

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If you delete a single word (or even two or three words) from the start of a quote, should you still use an ellipsis (…) or can you put the first non-deleted word in square brackets ([Word])?

For example, if I want to delete the word "to" from s.10(c) of the Canadian Charter, which goes as follows:

(c) to have the validity of the detention determined by way of habeas corpus and to be released if the detention is not lawful.

would I write:

'…have the validity, etc.'

or:

'[have] the validity, etc.'

I'm fairly sure that multiple deleted words within a quotation are replaced with an ellipsis offset by a space on each side, or part of the quotation placed within square brackets if only a few words are removed or re-ordered (if someone could confirm this, please). So at the moment I'm concluding logically that a deleted word at the start of a quotation is replaced by an ellipsis also.

Best Answer

Just start the quote

If you have the text "(c) to have the validity of the detention determined by way of habeas corpus and to be released if the detention is not lawful" and want to skip to the middle of it, you just do that:

Section C of the statute states that the validity of the detention should be determined "by way of habeas corpus".

There's no need or sense in putting ellipses before the quote since nothing germane to your sentence or its sense is being omitted. There are occasions where you may want to draw attention to word that was left out from your quote, but there are more straightforward ways of doing it than hoping your reader notices the importance of your ellipsis.

In very formal contexts, you may wish to note that you've changed a letter's case because of a difference in grammatical placement. In those cases, you don't bracket the whole word, just the offending letter.

Section c of the statue reads that detained citizens may petition the court to "[h]ave the validity of the detention determined by way of habeas corpus and to be released if the detention is not lawful".

That final period can go inside or outside the quotes; the former is more common in American English.

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