Learn English – Figuring out what’s wrong with the sentence


I took a quiz given in the BBC magazine. it had the following sentence.

The Queen arrived at the castle with the King by her side, in a dress
adorned with hand-sewn embroidered dragons.

please explain what is technically wrong with the above sentence.

Best Answer

There should be a comma after "Castle" which clearly seperates the phrase "with the King by her side". The comma after "by her side" clearly indicates that it is the Queen that is wearing the 'hand-sewn' dress.

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