Learn English – How to punctuate around parentheses

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Which of these punctuation examples is more correct?

  • On December 7, 1941, ("a date which will live in infamy") Japan bombed Pearl Harbor.

  • On December 7, 1941 ("a date which will live in infamy"), Japan bombed Pearl Harbor.

  • On December 7, 1941, ("a date which will live in infamy"), Japan bombed Pearl Harbor.

Edit: A little background on my question may be in order. According to most, if not all, online references I could find, a comma is required after the year when writing a date in the above American style. For example, from Wikipedia: "most style manuals, including The Chicago Manual of Style and the AP Stylebook, recommend that the year be treated as a parenthetical, requiring a second comma after it." See also, Chicago Manual of Style Online, the Language Portal of the Canadian Government, and Wikipedia's own style guide.

I couldn't find a reference for how to punctuate serial parentheticals.

Best Answer

Of your three options, I consider the first best, as the second option seems to associate your quote with just the year, and the third option's final comma seems entirely unnecessary, as the parentheses are jarring enough for the reader to not need another comma!

May I ask why you think the parentheses are necessary? The sentence would be better if you simply omit them, and perhaps rephrase:

Japan bombed Pearl Harbor December 7, 1941, "a date which will live in infamy."
"A date which will live in infamy," Japan bombed Pearl Harbor December 7, 1941.
Japan bombed Pearl Harbor on "a date which will live in infamy," December 7, 1941.

Also, I did not modify the quoted text, but note the which should be that.