Learn English – Is ‘contemporary’ ambiguous and if so is there a better word

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It's not that I don't know what contemporary means.

It's just that in my specific sentence (below) I'm not sure if it could be ambiguous. If it is ambiguous, then I'm looking for a word or phrase to substitute for 'contemporary' that makes it clear that the pagan philosophers lived at a time when Christianity was still in its infancy. Here's the sentence:

And that’s what the early modern readers of Celsus, Porphyry and
Julian were bent on discovering: how early Christianity was
perceived and judged by contemporary pagan philosophers.

'Contemporary' is meant to refer to the pagans of antiquity, not of the early modern period (and certainly not modern-day pagans).
Is this clear?
Would 'coeval' make it any clearer?

And that’s what the early modern readers of Celsus, Porphyry and
Julian were bent on discovering: how early Christianity was perceived and judged by coeval pagan
philosophers.

Or do I have to completely changed the sentence to be unambiguous:

And that’s what the early modern readers of Celsus, Porphyry and
Julian were bent on discovering: how early Christianity was perceived
and judged by the pagan philosophers who witnessed its birth and
infancy.

(I would prefer not to have to use the last sentence, since my sentence is a translation from German and I would prefer to stay more closely to the original text.)

Best Answer

I think usage of contemporary would be less ambiguous if you reworded slightly:

...how early Christianity was perceived and judged by its pagan philosopher contemporaries.

This way, you're explicitly stating that the pagan philosophers are contemporary to early Christianity.

Also, if you wanted, you could remove reference to specific pagan philosophers:

...how early Christianity was perceived and judged by contemporary [or contemporaneous] pagan philosophy.

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