I know that if I was supposed to spin a grammatically correct sentence with the same meaning, I would probably say:
Does anybody else have any other concerns?
However, is the sentence in the subject of the question correct as well, even if unusual??
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To my mind it is not clear whether this sentence is a statement or a question:
If it's intended to be a statement, then the use of "Anybody" is incorrect, because that implies a question, so it should be something like:
If, on the other hand, it is intended to be a question, then the use of "anybody" is correct, but the subject-verb word order is wrong for a question and should be reversed. Hence your alternative version is fine:
Summarising, if I were reading / hearing the sentence:
I would not know whether you were asking a question or making a statement, because the word order suggests a statement, but the use of "anybody" suggests a question.