Learn English – My English is inefficient. How to fix this

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Lately I've noticed that my English is inefficient and it makes me sound inarticulate at best. (Uneducated at worst.) Here is an example. Today I told my younger cousin this:

You shouldn't make any commitments if you're not going to see them through to the end

And then I started thinking about it. A much more efficient and nicer sounding sentence would've been:

You shouldn't commit to things you won't see through

It's shorter, more articulate and conveys the exact same message. This happens almost everyday. I find myself getting stuck mid-sentence or re-thinking sentences after I've said them.

Some background: I was born in a Spanish-speaking country and speak Spanish fluently. However, I came to the US at age 4 and haven't left since. I consider English to be my first language. I grew up in a low-income neighborhood where people mostly spoke Spanish or broken English. My mom doesn't speak English fluently and my dad does but with a strong accent and occasional blips. I don't have a college education.

I'm especially looking for something like a book. I haven't been able to find one for "efficient English." If someone could recommend something I'd be very grateful.

Best Answer

To be honest with you, the best way to improve your language is to merely read more. I recommend periodicals given the wide variety and short time commitment to individual pieces.

By reading the writing of others frequently, you will eventually begin to assimilate the styles and sentence construction of better writers. (Even if it happens unconsciously.)

Pick publications that have an interest to you, but that are written at the level which you wish to communicate.

For example, reading the New Yorker may expose you to writers who are more choosey about their prose. But, if you are bored to tears by the content, you will not find it easy to keep up with the habit. (I'm not knocking the New Yorker, it's a great publication. I'm just using it as an example.)

If reading the New York Times, on the other hand, proves more interesting to you, you will likewise be exposed to the high level of literary competence and be able to keep up with it.

I think the efficiency will come to you naturally as your level of literary competence improves. You may also find that with better constructed sentences, you will not need them to be more efficient.

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