I’m currently searching for the title of my research thesis and I can’t find a good phrase.
I did a “Systematic Analysis of fruit growth” in a generic way and additionally applied the analysis to apples.
Regarding the content I thought of the following title:
- “Systematic Analysis of the fruit growth at the example of apples”
- “Systematic Analysis of the fruit growth exemplify by apples”
Both sound awkward and might even be not correct (they sound incorrect to me)
I came up with the following other possibilities:
- “Systematic Analysis of the fruit growth demonstrated on apples”
- “Systematic Analysis of the fruit growth taking the example of apples”
- “Systematic Analysis of the fruit growth applied on apples”
- “Systematic Analysis of the fruit growth using apples as a case study”
- “Systematic Analysis of the fruit growth demonstrated on apples as a case study”
None of these really fits what I wanted to say. I would go for the first one, but I’m not sure whether “demonstrate” might be to informal and one might think of a “demonstration” (show on a stage).
Is there another correct phrase for “at the example of ”?
Best Answer
sounds good.