Learn English – Should I use a comma or a period in this sentence

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Which of the sentences below is correct? My friend said the comma between holiday and can is correct, but I disagree. I feel like the sentence is better structured when you have a period between holiday and can. Please give me some advice. Thanks

  1. We noticed you reported working hours for the 4th of July, while most companies observed that day as a holiday, can you please confirm?

  2. We noticed you reported working hours for the 4th of July, while most companies observed that day as a holiday. Can you please confirm?

Best Answer

We noticed you reported working hours for the 4th of July, while most companies observed that day as a holiday. Can you please confirm? ..... this is very correct, so you could say :

While most companies observed that day as a holiday, we noticed you reported working hours for the 4th of July. could you please confirm?

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