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past-vs-presenttenses

I am writing a personal statement for applying to a school, and I have a question about past tense. The following paragraph describes things that happened several years ago:

My school is located in a rural area and has an extremely small Asian-student body. During my first semester, I did not have a car and could not go anywhere outside of the school.

My question is: since I am describing things which happened in the past, should the first sentence be past tense? But I think the first sentence is describing something that has not changed now, so present tense is okay as well?

Best Answer

Yes, your first sentence should be in the past tense. The tenses of your sentences should agree. Maybe this year the number of Asian students has risen markedly, but it's not important now -- it might have been when you went there, though.

I wonder what kind of school you're talking about. Sounds like a college because you were already driving.

I'd revise the first sentence to read:

I went to an isolated rural college with very few Asian students.

I'm assuming that this was in an anglophone country, probably the USA (because of the car reference).

I'd revise the second sentence to read:

First semester, I had no car and did not leave the campus.

You don't want to sound helpless by saying that because you had no car, you couldn't go anywhere off campus. I added "isolated" to "rural" because, if you didn't leave the campus solely because you had no car, it means that there was no local town within walking distance and no public transportation. It's necessary to think a little bit more about the implications of what you say and how you say it.

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