Learn English – Should there be a comma after ‘I thought’ if this phrase is followed by an italicised thought

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For example, if writing:

I thought, she may miss him, but tonight you can't tell.

should there be a comma after 'I thought', or any other punctuation for that matter? I know commas are often used if the context is 'I said', followed by the speech,

e.g. I said, 'stop that car!'

but I'm not sure if it works the same when using thoughts and italics!

Thank you!

Best Answer

Yes, you can separate any reporting clause from direct speech or direct thoughts with a comma. Cambridge explains the rule with literally spoken words, but the same is true for thoughts and for methods of representing quotation like italics. Grammar Book gives this example:

I lied, Charles thought, but maybe she will forgive me.

Even without italics, the comma separates the reporting clause (Charles thought) from the thoughts. Here's an example from Daily Writing Tips.

It seemed a needless thing to do, Rachel thought.

Again, the reporting clause (Rachel thought) is separated from the thought. The absence of quotation marks or italics doesn't matter.

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