Learn English – Syntax in poetry

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Could you please explain why the syntax in the following stanza is wrong?

Surrounded
by that sturdy assertiveness
that walled England the din
of traffic in my mind quietens,

Best Answer

There is nothing I can see wrong in the syntax of that stanza. In fact, unlike much poetry, there is no serious lexical ambiguity; and with a single comma it would render just fine as a prose sentence:

Surrounded by that sturdy assertiveness that walled England, the din of traffic in my mind quietens.

Take "that sturdy assertiveness that walled England" to mean "the trait that formed a wall around England, which I will call 'sturdy assertiveness'" ... and thus shielded [as I am from such assertiveness], the noise of traffic in my mind becomes still.

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