Take for example:
I met Raschel three years ago. He
represented a small company of which
he was also the proprietor. He came to
show the presentation of his product
plan. Many companies, big and small,
sent their representatives to grab
this opportunity. The board held a
meeting and decided to call upon
companies specializing in these
I have few queries:
Is it appropriate to start the second line with "He came" or it should be "He had come"?
The last line, when checked with www.paperrater.com, gets underline under "held a meeting". What is the proper way to replace these words?