Is this Homebrew AC increasing magic item for monk balanced

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I have made a Rare item based off advice from a previous post and the Defensive Duelist feat. Is this item balanced as a Rare, and if not how can it be balanced?

Cloak of Swirling water

This cloak is made of water that lazily swirls around its wearer in the shape of a Samue. Attacks made against the wearer pass through one side of the cloak and out the other as if the wearer was entirely made of water.

As a reaction to a attacker hitting you, you may spend 1 ki point. If you do, until the start of your next turn you add a bonus to your AC equal to your Wisdom Modifier. This AC bonus potentially causes the triggering attack to miss you. Additionally, you may pay 1 extra ki point when you activate this ability to regain your reaction.

Best Answer

The item is slightly clunky, but with a few changes, it should work well.

The change to limit the uses without restricting the upside enables a monk to actively use this item to stack their AC bonus from the Unarmored Defense feature. If the monk has a way to access the Shield spell, they could use 2 Ki points to stack the bonus even further - that is strong but also costly.

It also grants immense flexibility in combination with other reaction abilities that monks may use and compares to the (third-party) Cobalt Soul's Mind of Mercury class feature that they gain at 11th level. But the restriction keeps it in check. You should adjust the item to follow the same restriction as it:

Once per turn, when you activate this ability, you may pay 1 extra ki point to regain your reaction.

This phrasing will prevent arguments at your table about whether you can use the feature a number of times restricted to your ki points or whether they don't stack etc. — it makes everything easier.

In your other posted you commented that you designed this item for your table only, but you should still either make clear that you intend the following line to be flavour — or that it describes the active use of the item:

Attacks made against the wearer pass through one side of the cloak and out the other as if the wearer was entirely made of water.

A literal reading of that would probably lead to a lot of excitement followed by disgruntled disappointment, so you should be upfront about that when the player receives the item or reword it slightly.

There is only one official magic item that interacts with ki points - the Dragonhide Belt, which doesn't enable you to spend ki points - instead, it lets you restore them and gives a bonus to the saving throw DCs of your ki features, so you are in new territory. I don't think it is an issue for your at-home use.

You don't mention that this item requires attunement, so I assume that it doesn't, and I think it is appropriate that it doesn't require attunement.

From a rarity perspective, it falls neatly into what one would expect to find in the Magic Item Table G, featuring rare items mostly and a few powerful uncommon items.

I would be excited to use the item when I play a monk that works as a striker in the party composition.

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