[RPG] Is this homebrew Armorer Artificer subclass balanced compared to the 2019 UA Artificer subclasses

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Here is my homebrew subclass for the 2019 UA Artificer class:

Armorer

Tools of the Trade

By the time you adopt this specialty at 3rd level, you’re deeply
familiar with employing its tools.

Proficiencies: You gain proficiency with smith's tools and
cobbler's tools. You also gain a set of alchemist’s supplies and an
herbalism kit for free—the result of tinkering you’ve done as you’ve
prepared for this specialization.

Crafting: If you craft a magic item in the armor category, it takes
you a quarter of the normal time, and it costs you half as much
of the usual gold.

Subclass Spells

Starting at 3rd level, you always have certain spells prepared after
you reach particular levels in this class, as shown in the Alchemist
Spells table. These spells count as artificer spells for you, but they
don’t count against the number of artificer spells you prepare.

3rd level: Shield of Faith, Armor of Agathys
5th level: Warding Bond, Barkskin
9th level: Tiny Hut, Crusader's Mantle
13th level: Stoneskin, Fire Shield
17th level: Antilife Shell, Circle of Power

Heavily Armored

After a long rest, you can touch one set of heavy armor and imbue it
with magic over the course of 10 minutes. This magic lasts until you
take another long rest. You are proficient in heavy armor that has
been imbued in this way. Only you can wear the armor that has been
imbued in this way by you.

You have a number of Armorer Points (AP) equal to your Artificer level.
When you imbue the armor with magic, you can spend AP to give the
armor enhancements listed below, these enhancements cease to operate
after the armor's magic wears off. AP is also used for features you
will gain at higher levels. You regain any expended Armorer Points
when you take a long rest.

  • Projectile Protection
    Cost: 5 AP
    You have resistance to piercing damage from ranged weapon attacks while
    wearing this armor.

  • Flight
    Cost: 18 AP
    You gain a flying speed of 30 feet while wearing this armor.

  • Mobility
    Cost: 3 AP
    You ignore difficult terrain while wearing this armor.

  • Speed
    Cost: 2-20 AP
    Your walking speed increases by 5 feet for every 2 AP you spend on
    this Enhancement.

  • Aqua Affinity
    Cost: 2 AP
    You gain a swimming speed equal to your walking speed.

  • Flamethrower
    Cost: 17 AP
    You can cast Firebolt as a bonus action while wearing this armor.

  • Electrified
    Cost: 2 AP
    Whenever a creature starts their turn grappling you or being
    grappled by you, they take 1d4 lightning damage.

  • Night Vision
    Cost: 4 AP
    You gain darkvision out to a range of 30 feet. You can't discern
    color in darkness, only shades of gray.

  • Sonar
    Cost: 8 AP
    While underwater, you have blindsight out to a range of 120 feet.

  • Precise Targeting
    Cost: 3 AP
    You gain a +1 bonus to ranged weapon attack rolls.

  • Redirect Energy
    Cost: 7 AP
    When you take lightning, force, or radiant damage, you can use your
    reaction to force all other creatures within 30 feet of you to make
    a Dexterity saving throw; they take 2d10 thunder damage on a failed
    save, or half as much on a success.

  • Respiration
    Cost: 3 AP
    While you are wearing this armor, you can breathe underwater.

  • Tin Foil
    Cost: 12 AP
    While you are wearing this armor, your mind cannot be dominated,
    charmed, or read by a spell of 5th level or lower.

  • Lantern
    Cost: 2 AP
    You shed bright light in a 30-foot radius and dim light for an
    additional 60 feet while wearing this armor.

  • Strong
    Cost: 3 AP
    Your carrying capacity is tripled when wearing this armor.

  • Scintillating Blade
    Cost: 9 AP
    When you do slashing or piercing damage to a creature or object
    with a melee weapon, they take an additional 1d4 damage if they
    are a creature, or 8d4 damage if they are an object.

Master of Armor

When you reach 6th level in this class, you can spend 10 AP to
increase your AC by 3 for the next hour. Once you use this feature,
you cannot use it again until you complete a long rest.

Supreme Master of Armor

At level 14, you gain proficiency in martial weapons. Whenever you
take damage, you can spend AP to reduce the damage you take by 1d6 per
AP spent.

I'm hoping to make a versatile tank subclass.

Is this homebrew Armorer Artificer subclass balanced compared to the 2019 UA Artificer subclasses?

Best Answer

No. A few things to note that stand out

  1. crafting bonuses at lv. 3. Being able to gain the equivalent of a current lv 10 ability for artificers at lv 3, even if only for one kind of object is overpowered. Being able to gain powerful armor so early in the game seems cool, and is, but it is way too powerful at such a low level.

  2. too flexible. With all these available options at lv 5 and increasing, this gains too much flexibility for a subclass. Consider that one of the main properties of the warlock is the eldritch invocation, and that you have a similar amount of special abilities as invocations for the entire class, as one of the class's main features, and you can see that for a sublcass, this is way too good.

  3. Lackluster higher abilities. I get that heavily armored is supposed to be it's main thing, and it's scaling is most of the subclass, but the higher abilities are so underwhelming that they almost might as well not exist. The sixth level thing is confusing, and better suited as part of the original ability, and martial weapon proficiency at lv 14? I don't want to harp too much, but that is way too late to be gaining proficiencies in weapon types. At that point your character should know what weapons they want to be using, not gaining proficiencies in all martial weapons.

  4. Inbalances in the main feature. The main feature, as mentioned previously, is obviously the Heavily Armored ability. At level 17 you can use the majority of your subclass' ability into casting a cantrip as a bonus action, while at the same time at lv 12 you have protection from most mind manipulation, and at just lv 8 you can essentially be the ultimate underwater explorer. These are quite large differences, and the problem is that in the quest for diversity in options while retaining balance, most of these abilities come across as bland, and not particularly diverse at all.

  5. Confusion with the main ability. The AP points don't make much sense to me. You start out by saying you spend them to enchant the armor, but then all the later abilities require using them (and not a small amount of them), but only at later points in time. You need to clarify if you need to save points, or if you can unenchant things later or what. Also, either way, the limit on how many you have versus how many you spend on later abilities makes them quite limited, when you generally just want to have cool enchanted armor

  6. It's not all bad. I do like where you are going with this though, regardless of what I have just pointed out, and I don't want to feel like all I'm doing is shutting you down here. I'm not. I really like the idea. I really like the basis behind the main ability. I love the idea of an armor-enchanter. It just still needs work

All and all, I really like where these ideas are coming from, but it needs a lot of work. By trying to create diversity while retaining balance you seem to have achieved neither. So here's my advice.

  1. Move the armor creation ability back. It's just too powerful for a lv 3 character to have

  2. Move up martial weapon proficiency. At lv 14, people either have martial weapon proficiency, or they don't. And if they don't they've already built around that, so essentially the proficiency at this point is pointless.

  3. Consolidate the armor enchantments. Instead of having so many different enchantments that don't get any job done that they are supposed to, make a few packages that get better as you level up. Like this:

Mind Protector (Requires 10 AP): You gain immunity against mind controlling effects created by spells of level 3 or lower. For every extra 2 AP spent on this enchantment, the spell level it protects against increases by 1.

Have a few sets like this, and you can have diversity, utility, and balance all in one, without being too much or too little of any.

  1. Change the other AP abilities. The other AP abilities are just confusing with how AP works. Instead make them into enchantment sets of their own, or build them into every set, as I describe next

  2. After this, you might need some more abilities. Not to worry. A good way to do this could be to have the abilities of each enchantment set get an enhancement. Perhaps have an ability added to each, that lets you de-level them in exchange for a temporary boost. Something like that. Or, create new abilities that just give all of your enchanted armor some bonuses. That would work as well

I really hope that all of this helps you. I can't wait to see how you change this for it's next version, and I hope that this helps gives you a feel for what needs changing in that next version.

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