[RPG] Is this homebrew Sky Barbarian subclass balanced against other barbarian paths

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This Sky Barbarian path is loosely based on the Path of the Storm Herald barbarian and the Way of the Four Elements monk. It is designed to give barbarians a way to deal damage on range without sacrificing melee damage but I am worried that it is a bit too powerful in damage.

How does it compare to other barbarian paths in terms of damage?


Sky Barbarian

Saving Throw DC

Some sky barbarian traits require a saving throw. The DC for this is 8 + proficiency + constitution modifier.

Level 3 – Building Charge

While raging you gain the following benefits:

  • You emit a stormy aura, sparking against all enemies within 10 feet when you enter your rage and again at the beginning of each turn for the duration of your rage. Each time this hits an enemy you gain one static electricity point to a maximum of your barbarian level. you lose all your points when you exit your rage.

  • You can use an action and up to half of your maximum static electricity to discharge a bolt of lightning to a creature within 30 feet. the creature must make a dexterity saving throw and take 1d8 lightning damage for each expended point or half as much on a successful save. This counts as attacking for the purposes of continuing your rage.

Level 6 – Fly Like the Wind

You gain a flying speed equal to your movement speed but can't end your turn in the air. Alternatively, you can halve your flying speed to stay in the air until your next turn.

Level 10 – Lightning Strike

When you hit a creature with a weapon attack, you can cause the attack to deal an extra 1d6 lightning damage to the target. When you reach 15th level, the extra damage increases to 2d6.

Level 14 – Electric Discharge

You can use an action to end your rage early and release a blast for its full potential, dealing 1d8 lightning damage for half your max static electricity charges to everyone in 10 feet or half as much on a successful dexterity saving throw. You need at least a fourth of your static electricity charges to use this. You can only use this ability once every long rest. At level 18, you are able to use this ability twice per long rest.

Best Answer

Is this balanced against original Barbarian paths? No. Not at all.

Let's take this level by level:

Level 3: Building Charge

First off, it's unclear as to how the static points are generated. Is it just if there's an enemy in range? Is it if you strike an enemy in range? Regardless of how the points are gained, at level 3, they can have a maximum of 3 points, meaning they can expend either 1 or 2 points to use an action to shock an enemy. This means they'll likely be taking 1d8 or 2d8 lightning damage, which, at earlier levels, seems on par with default barbarian damage.

However, compared with the level 3 abilities from the Player's Handbook, on pages 49 and 50, we run into an issue that will continue to come up throughout this path: the other abilities tend more towards support abilities than damage. The Berserker gains the ability to go into a frenzy and take an attack on a bonus action, but with the harsh penalty of gaining a point of exhaustion at the end of the rage. The Totem barbarian gains either resistance to more damage, more mobility in combat, or an aura that helps nearby allies.

I think at early levels, this ability might not get used; I'm not great at statistics, so if someone has run the math and can tell me I'm wrong, that's fine, but I believe that for a while, this ability will be worse than the barbarian just attacking normally. Once you start reaching higher levels, this starts to be a lot of d8s of damage that the barbarian can put out. And, notably, this is a magical form of damage, which means that the barbarian will be able to effectively hit monsters that are immune to piercing, slashing, and bludgeoning damage. Whether or not this is unbalanced depends largely on the campaign, but it's worth noting.

Level 6: Fly like the Wind

Meh. Flying is incredibly situational. However, the Totem path doesn't get flying until level 14, so this is still weird. Getting flight at level 6 when most classes can't get it until much later is odd.

Level 10: Lightning Strike

This is similar to the Paladin's "Improved Divine Smite" ability, which is gained at level 11, but also does 1d8 damage as opposed to the 1d6 for Lightning Strike. So, compared to a Paladin, this is okay, but again, it's very different from the PHB options. The Totem path gains the commune with nature spell, and the Berserker gains the ability to inflict the frightened condition, both of which I would classify as "support" abilities, rather than damage dealing ones. This is a decent chunk of extra damage, and at level 15, it'll actually outpace the Paladin's Divine Smite.

Level 14: Electric Discharge

Absolutely not. At level 14, this is 7d8 lightning damage to everyone nearby. At level 20, it's 10d8 lightning damage to everyone nearby, in addition to the fact that at level 20, you have unlimited rages. AOE damage is an enormous gamechanger; there's a reason that AOE damage is pretty rare. Having it be once per long rest helps, but it still doesn't bring this on par with the other Barbarian options at level 14. Again, they don't add damage to the class, but rather tactical and supporting abilities. This is the appropriate level for flight, for example, in the PHB.

Finally, regarding intent:

You say your goal is to have the barbarian be able to do damage at range, but I don't think this will work well for that. The Stormy Aura requires lots of targets within 10 feet in order to charge up points, which I wouldn't consider as being at range. Additionally, the point of the Barbarian is to be in melee. That's why they have such high constitution: they're the front line tanky people who stand there and get hit so that the squishy rogues and wizards can toss daggers and spells around without fear.

I think this is a really cool concept, but I think it's weirdly balanced throughout levels. Compared to the original barbarian paths, the extra damage output of this is just too much, especially when the barbarian paths contain primarily support abilities, and the few abilities (like frenzied rage) that grant extra damage come at a high price.