Learn English – Choose the right variant

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Please help me to choose one of the three variants listed below. I need to know which one sounds better and fresher. And if no one sounds good, I need to know it. As I’m not a native speaker of English, it’s a bit difficult to feel the nuances.

What I mean to say with these phrases is that there’s some innovative technology that permits everyone to find and choose any kind of good or service faster and more effectively than ever before. It’s a kind of revolution in the process of searching and choosing—a new approach.

The variations I have are:

  1. revolution of choice
  2. choice revolution
  3. revolution in choice

Which, if any, of these best expresses my meaning?

Best Answer

The third phrase is the only one I would consider.

Incidentally, you need to check the spelling of some of your words...

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Here's my suggestion for improving your text:

There is a type of innovative technology that will permit anyone to locate and select all kinds of goods and services faster and more effectively than ever. It takes a completely new approach, and represents a revolution in search and selection.

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