Learn English – Word order with “just” and “only” meaning “merely”

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Marking a German student's test I have encountered the following problem:

The relationship between the two adolescents is one-sided. Just the boy really feels something, the girl hates him.

Can just be used here? My gut feeling says it should be only, although both words can mean "merely" and do in this case.

Best Answer

The sentence "Just the boy really feels something, the girl hates him." has two problems.

The first, as Barrie says, is the comma splice between two independent clauses.

The second is the contradiction. Both the girl and the boy feel something. Presumably, however, the boy loves the girl but the girl hates the boy. Hate is a feeling.

Neither only nor just is appropriate here.

The relationship between the two adolescents is {unbalanced / unequal / antagonistic / incongruous / inconsonant}. The boy loves the girl, but she hates him.

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